Wednesday, 2 April 2014

Jaya's Tui bird story

We are learning about Tui birds and Jaya wrote a fabulous story during Guided Writing. 
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8 comments:

  1. Anonymous2 April 2014 at 16:54

    Hi Jaya,
    We liked how you drew your picture and wrote in your best handwriting.
    Great work Jaya keep it up.
    From Oliver & George R3

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    1. Unknown3 April 2014 at 13:04

      Thank you Oliver and George for the booster statement.
      From Jaya

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  2. Ruth3 April 2014 at 01:51

    Hi Jaya,

    Your writing is really amazing. I am super impressed with your description of the tui :)

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    1. Unknown3 April 2014 at 13:07

      Thank you Ruth, I hope I see a real Tui in our forest from our classroom soon. Then I can write more stories.
      From Jaya

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  3. Anonymous7 April 2014 at 22:32

    Hi Jaya,
    Wow, I love your bright and colourful Tui drawing. You have used some very descriptive language to describe him. Big effort, well done. Love Mummy

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  4. Anonymous8 April 2014 at 14:58

    Jaya, what a lovely story. Your tui is clever. It can fly and sing but it can't dive to the bottom of the pool or write a story.
    John phua

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    1. Unknown8 April 2014 at 19:13

      Thank you uncle for your lovely comment, my Tui bird is clever like you!
      From Jaya

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